When I'm Yandere

Video: When I'm Yandere
Autor: ArticWolf
Audio: Sporty-O Let me hit it
Anime: Mirai Nikki
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hi! Well, the video is quite moved, but the transitions i didn't like (especially those flashes). The scenes are very random, you should follow a line (for example, show as the character). Try to hide the watermark if is possible. the lyrics could have some animation too (they were very sharp). And I ... (at least me: P) I see very similar to this video When I'm Bored! Extended well, I think that's all bye

cariuchiha wrote:hi! Well, the video is quite moved, but the transitions i didn't like (especially those flashes). The scenes are very random, you should follow a line (for example, show as the character). Try to hide the watermark if is possible. the lyrics could have some animation too (they were very sharp). And I ... (at least me: P) I see very similar to this video When I'm Bored! Extended well, I think that's all bye

Yes, I intentionally used the idea of "When I'm Bored" the reason is, it's become a meme - http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/when-im-bored, and that "When I'm bored" video, isn't the only kind, infact many people have made "When I'm..." videos using different anime series, and I noticed there was none for Mirai Nikki, so it wasn't like I was stealing ideas

As for the rest, Thanks for the feedback, this wasn't really supposed to be a proper AMV and it was really a bit of fun, but I'll take what you said into consideration. Thanks